Another problem is Barthesian in essence. It is written language which Hazard uses to delineate the meaning of silent language; what operated without overt gesture in the period demands the noisy work of Hazard's pen in order to recover it for the contemporary reader. The effect of this is often garrulous and lacking in clear argument. In a book which includes material on drawing and painting, typography, cartography, dining, tapestries, costume, jewellery, coins, gifts, procession, travel, the prospect, funeral monuments, architecture, architectural positioning, and decorum (spatial demarcation), to name most, but not all, of her topics, a strong theoretical underpinning is essential. I am afraid that quite a few of the chapters are basically descriptive rather than offering a clear explanation of the value of Hazard's examples. Too frequently their significance in the argument is assumed to be self-explanatory. When I reached page 148 I breathed a sigh of relief because a quotation from Henri Lefebvre could be tested in a way in which much of the foregoing material could not. It was not that the Lefebvre quotation was complex; it simply made the point that pre-existing architecture conditions, in all kinds of ways, what follows it. This I found refreshing because a good deal of Hazard's own thinking is not similarly rooted, or contained textually, as can be ascertained from her proposal for chapter 6:
- The subject of the last chapter – place, position, and liminality – often spilled over its own bounds and onto the subjects of this one and the next to follow, which are concerned with two of the main ways by which Elizabethans limited, controlled, and styled non-verbal communication. This chapter [chapter 6] will be concerned with the shaping of motion and the control of time; the next will be more particularly dedicated to the uses of decorum and protocol, but both will necessarily consider expression through ritual, ceremony, and public performance. (173)
Rather like a conference paper badly over-time, the reader's patience is likely to be tested by such indulgence. On the following page, 174, Hazard declares
- It has long been a truism among historians, including specialists in the history of art and technology, that a primary distinction between the Renaissance and earlier history was a new interest in the nature of time and especially in its more accurate scientific measurement. A corollary development was observation of relational position, motion, and consequent change, as manifested, for example, in Leonardo's notebooks and Vesalian anatomy.
As an historian of art and technology, I wondered after reading this whether it would be more beneficial for readers wishing to explore these kinds of issues to read Paradise Lost than become entangled in dubious generality. I might have used the word 'knot' but that too is a subject, in passing, featured in this book.